Workshop 3 Critique » Design 6 – Ana

Design 6 - Ana

Design 6 – Ana

The third in a series of three posters. The designer intends the explanatory text to appear outside of the hand on all three posters.

3 Responses

  1. The bright Yellow really catches your eye and it says caution to me. I am not quite sure what the thumbs up is communicating to the reader. I am looking forward to seeing how this poster shapes up. Of the 3 designs Ana, I prefer the red one. It has the most imediate impact for me. Great use of positive and negative space.

    • Mike, muchas gracia buddy for taking the time to help out in this virtual way. It was really great to be able to share your observations with the young designers. They seemed to soak up the idea that so many fine professionals were watching and supporting what they are doing. You are already making an impact on these kids lives.

  2. Hola Ana! La idea de la silueta de la mano es buena, pero esta silueta de la mano me sugiere un “OK” y no se que quieres transmitir con eso, pues es un poco confuso. Sigue adelante, agrega los textos que faltan y veamos a donde quieres llegar con el diseño. Siempre recuerda la información de la enfermedad y el logotipo del cliente. De los tres diseños me gustó más el celeste por la silueta de la mano con el número dos. Creo que ese es el diseño y el concepto que debes reforzar de los tres. ¡Excelente trabajo!
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    Hello Ana! the idea of the silhouette is good, but this hand silhouette suggests an “OK” and I don’t quite know where you want to say with it, it’s a little confusing. Keep on going, add the remaining texts and we can see how the design goes. Always remember to add the disease information and the client’s logo. Out of the three designs, the one I liked the most is the second one with the hand silhouette with the number two. I think that’s the design and concept you have to build up out of the three. Great work!

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