Workshop 3 Critique » Design 5 – Ana

Design 5 - Ana

Design 5 – Ana

The second in a series of three posters. The designer intends the explanatory text to appear outside of the hand on all three posters.

2 Responses

  1. I like how the hand signifies type 2. The contrast of the headline and background is great. My one suggestion is that this poster offers a bit more information and the organizational logo. I like where this one is going and I would like to see more. Great start!

  2. Hola de nuevo Ana! Lo que me encanta de este poster es la silueta de la mano con el número dos. De los tres diseños, este es mi concepto favorito. Creo que con el fondo de un color un poco más llamativo y fuerte, para que tenga un contraste mejor con el blanco, puede ser una opción mejor para que llame más la atención. Es importante que agregues información de la enfermedad como te lo comenté en el diseño anterior. En general, ¡Gran trabajo!
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    Hello again Ana! What I love about this poster is the hand silhouette with the number two. Out of the three designs, this is my favorite concept. I think that the background in a little bit brighter and strong color, so it has a better contrast with the white, can be a great option so it brings more attention from the viewer. It’s important that you also add information about the disease like I commented on your previous design. Great job overall!

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